For the past few weeks we have been doing descriptive writing.We have been working on 3 but my favourite one would have to be my mountain one.I hope you like my writing.
Here is the photo we were writing about
I was in the forest,with a lot of big mountains and a big river.The weather was beautiful and the skies were cyan blue.There was smooth grass on the mountains.
I started to walk up the mountains and it was bumpy. The mountains were clear to see.They were so pointy, it looked like a rough pyramid.
The flowers were beautiful, they were bright yellow and some were white.The bushes were greenish and purple.The frozen snow on the mountains were melting like Ice Cream.
I felt the warm breeze come through my face, as I lie down on the grass and relax. The trees were swaying like crazy and I could feel the light wind coming through my mouth.
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