Here is my writing
Term 3
Banana volcano purple hairy
One day I was with my sister and we were swimming and our mum said
We got inside the house and we were eating a banana while looking at the hairy, purple
volcano. We were thinking what if the volcano was shaped as a banana? We were
laughing so hard we couldn’t breathe. Our mum said, “Why are you guys laughing really
loud?” So we told her what we were thinking and she laughed so that she couldn’t
breathe. We kept laughing until we couldn’t stop. We kept thinking about it everyday
when we saw the volcano.
volcano. We were thinking what if the volcano was shaped as a banana? We were
laughing so hard we couldn’t breathe. Our mum said, “Why are you guys laughing really
loud?” So we told her what we were thinking and she laughed so that she couldn’t
breathe. We kept laughing until we couldn’t stop. We kept thinking about it everyday
when we saw the volcano.
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